Vague

Pain.

Pressure.

Hurt.

Angst.

What is going on? I want to know. As I read the text, I feel tossed and turned around in the tumultuous waves of unbridled, vague thought . . .

Searching through files that pertain to various references dealing with grammar usage, one can possibly attempt to discover some different points that can be shown. Among these are points that could be used to help some writers improve upon skills that they might need to work on. This paper will offer these points to show what could possibly be improved upon.

No!!!! Be specific. Commit. Don't be afraid to use strong language (in a good way :)). Use active voice instead of passive voice. This is your paper, so make strong statements and back them up. Weak word choice is unattractive. Strong statements and bold points will motivate the reader to continue through the entirety of the paper.

Relax and type. Let your sentences carry your meaning forth to the reader. Writing with confidence, your readers will follow you wherever you clearly take them.

Clarity.

Peace.

Understanding.

Joy.


*The example paragraph was made up by the Writing Center ghosts and in no way pertains to any particular student.